My Short film First Draft

Wise Guys first draft from Lewis Watson on Vimeo.

My Storyboard

Music (Updated)

I have been frantically trying to edit my soundtrack but problems that have arised are being unable to upload or after editing the clip resorts back to its original form. 

To correct this I have uploaded my song onto the software 'Garage band' and have successfully edited the song but now having problems uploading into ' I-movie'

I have now uploaded the music onto Imovie and trimmed it into a 30 second piece. 

Empathy for Audience

Upon viewing my film my tutor has given me some feedback which resulting in the realisation there is a lack of empathy for both of my characters as there is not of information on their backgrounds or motives and in the case of the prisoner, reaction shots to empathise with him.


To  successfully create empathy I have to film some reaction shots of the prisoner character in order for the audience to relate to them and insert stills/shots to represent "memories' for the main character showing him as a father and having a relationship/missing his son.


To create these flashbacks I have carried out further research of transitions from two directors who are the main influence of my film: Guy Richie & Quentin Tarantino.

Interim Reflection- Monday 3rd February

Last Week's targets:

My targets are:

• To complete the first editing process of my film making it ready for peer assessment/ focus group by Friday this week to show to a focus group over the week - complete 
• I need to plan my focus group, I will use vimeo and facebook to distribute my first version and perhaps survey monkey to get feedback- pending 
• Create mock up posters for my film for audience feedback by Wednesday 5th February- pending 
• Write a review for my film