This is my narrative changed to a anachronic narrative:
The two main characters remain the same with the Mob boss still holding his son's killer captive but in homage to films such as Pulp Fiction and Memento I would show events out of order this then will ceate tension and an enigma for the audience as they have to piece together the events and put them in order themselves. This conforms to typical short film conventions as it shows experimentation and questions the audience.
The events I would show are the Mob Boss exiting his house with him then opening his garage to show his son's killer/prisoner. Then the narrative would fall back to show his son's killing and then switch back to the Mob Boss interrogating his prisoner, I would proceed this to show the killer trying to hide the evidence and finally show the relase of the prisoner.
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